Tagged: "essay"

September 03, 2010

So You Want To Get Into UCLA…

When it comes to applying to UCLA, the personal essay is the best way to stand out from the crowd.

June 08, 2010

How To Write A College Essay

The presentation of this video is meant to make you giggle. But the advice it contains is pretty darned good. If you need help with your college essay, you might want to work with a professional…to help you avoid becoming a “forest-enabling loser.” Mark Montgomery Educational Consultant and College Essay Editor

June 01, 2010

How Not To Write A College Essay

Well, here’s more from the humor department.  With all of my students making the jarring transition from finishing up final exams to writing their college essays over the summer, it might be helpful to view this.  Levity is necessary! Mark Montgomery Educational Consultant and Essay Editor

April 20, 2010

Student Grateful to College Advisor For Help With Application Essay

Your essay-writing editing was absolutely invaluable, and your small-school advice even more so. Were it not for you, I'd currently be very excited about a university that would probably be largely disappointing; thank you for steering me on the right track with time to spare!

November 20, 2009

College Admissions Essays: Wacky Prompts

High school seniors are now in the final stretch of cranking out their college admissions essays. Pity them. In an effort to keep students entertained during the admissions process, some colleges ask students to respond to some pretty wacky prompts. Why? Well, the cynic in me wants to say that these essays are a way [...]

August 05, 2009

Five Essential Tips for a Perfect College Essay

Writing about ourselves is one of the most difficult tasks we are called upon to do.  Ask any adult who has written their own résumé.  It can be hard to crow about your accomplishments, in part because we know that it’s not nice to brag. Essays aren’t about bragging.  They are an opportunity to bring [...]

August 04, 2009

Getting Started on Your College Admissions Essay

Writing about oneself is difficult.  Really difficult. But write about yourself you must.  So you may as well get started.  But how? Most students start with the five prompts offered by the Common Application.  Essentially, these boil down to the following: A person who has influenced you An experience that reflects your personality in some [...]

May 21, 2009

Big Mistakes on College Admission Essays

I ran across these hilarious mistakes on college admissions essays submitted to Vassar and Bates colleges. You can find them here at Beliefnet.com. I laughed. And then I cried, knowing how much the staff of the admissions officers were laughing–as they sent out the rejection letters. Always, always proofread those essays, folks.  And don’t leave [...]

May 10, 2009

Holding College Chiefs to Their Words

The Wall Street Journal came up with a neat trick: asking college presidents to write essays from the application to their own college. Tough assignment!. The results were reported the other day in an article entitled, “Holding College Chiefs to Their Words”. It’s a good read, and a helpful tonic to high school juniors who [...]

April 27, 2009

A Visit to Stanford

Today I spent a couple of hours at Stanford University.  It was my first visit to the campus, and I was part of an organized tour for college counselors.  We were given a brief professional overview of the admissions process, and then we went on a student-led tour. Here’s a brief overview of what I [...]